| MAJOR REPAIRS ¡@Body Repair
¡@Engine Repair
TUNE UPS
¡@Prewriting
¡@First Draft
¡@Revising
¡@Final Draft
¡@Sample Essays
Complete Essay
Introduction
Career Plans
Sample 1
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Introduction Paragraphs: Sample 2
¡@¡@I was born on January 24, 1972 in Taizhong,
Taiwan, Republic of China. I come from a family of four.
My father is a manager and engineer for Taiwan Power
Company while my mother is an elementary school teacher.
My parents have always emphasized the importance of a
good education.
Comment:
¡@¡@This is a dull and irrelevant introduction
paragraph. Most, if not all, of the information in this
first paragraph can be found on other parts of the
application. Probably nothing in this paragraph is
related to the author's interest in or plan for graduate
work. Finally, this introduction is just not interesting.
Avoid writing this type of introduction.
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